Is there something i overlooked in War Fury rotation ?

I just restarted WoW with TWW playing a Warrior. The last time, I played a DH during Legion.

I am having a hard time to find why I am doing this bad with my DPS during raid.

https://fr.warcraftlogs.com/reports/qzrPpyYftCgDbMHL#fight=17&type=damage-done&source=12

Here is a log of what i thought was a decent fight for me. I just timed my CDs for the adds pops. I dont understand how to improve... I dont feel like i am failing temerity a lot but wow analyser is telling me otherwise
https://wowanalyzer.com/report/qzrPpyYftCgDbMHL/17/12

Any advice ?